That was dark and erotic and very entertaining. Spike getting wound up in the Magic Box created breath catching tension that wasn't released until he came, and finally shut Harris up.
I loved this in voice paragraph: It always starts with the down and dirty method of simply ripping out his tongue. The smile stretches lazily across his face as he imagines the blood, the anguished aborted shrieks. But he can feel the chip warming up; hateful pulses creeping up the back of his skull as a warning. Fucking Initiative took his fangs and his fantasies at the same time. Spike not being allowed to even fantasize about violent retribution is just wrong.
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on 2008-07-08 03:31 pm (UTC)I loved this in voice paragraph: It always starts with the down and dirty method of simply ripping out his tongue. The smile stretches lazily across his face as he imagines the blood, the anguished aborted shrieks. But he can feel the chip warming up; hateful pulses creeping up the back of his skull as a warning. Fucking Initiative took his fangs and his fantasies at the same time. Spike not being allowed to even fantasize about violent retribution is just wrong.