This is really beautiful. You have Spike, Angelus and Dru's voices down perfectly, and Angel's thoughts are excellent as well.
You also convey Spike's thoughts so well through his dialogue. The moment when he and Angel break off their kissing and preliminary foreplay with Dru and Spike hesitates with his unspoken question to Angel was fantastic.
The description of Angel and Spike's kiss was also excellent, and Angel's thoughts that spending 20 years together with Spike was 'barely enough time to say hello', as well as the closing paragraph, were brilliant.
The description of the threesome was very intense, passionate and vivid- this is one of my favorite things you've written, and that is saying a lot.
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You also convey Spike's thoughts so well through his dialogue. The moment when he and Angel break off their kissing and preliminary foreplay with Dru and Spike hesitates with his unspoken question to Angel was fantastic.
The description of Angel and Spike's kiss was also excellent, and Angel's thoughts that spending 20 years together with Spike was 'barely enough time to say hello', as well as the closing paragraph, were brilliant.
The description of the threesome was very intense, passionate and vivid- this is one of my favorite things you've written, and that is saying a lot.